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Thursday, December 06, 2007

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ah winter...

silent night



From the windows that faced South Oxford Street I could see the clock at the top of the Williamsburgh Bank Building, grey in the daylight and glowing in the night. My lighthouse in the heart of Brooklyn. The apartment was always too hot, you couldn't shut the radiators off and they hissed and steamed and I sat there, wearing just underwear, staring at the tower against the fading December day, cassettes of a law book scattered around me but Joey Ramone screaming instead through mammoth JBL headphones plugged into a huge old Heathkit Amp I'd bought used on the street for way too little. It was filled with vacuum tubes and lit up the corner of the room like a mad scientist's laboratory while adding it's own great heat to the situation.

As I stared snow began to drop from the dark clouds and the tower's edges faded behind a white curtain until only the glow of the clock remained, a false red moon, and then, I had switched now to a tape of a friend's band,  the snow came much faster and the landmark completely vanished. The street below slipped back into its own time. I leaned against the window, elbows on the center rails, looking down on cars and asphalt made invisible and streetlamps reduced to ancient wattages by the thickness of the crystals in the air.

I heard a knock at the door. An impatient, obviously second or third knock. That surprised me. You had to be let in downstairs here. No direct access and no buzzer system either. No one would just knock unless it was one of the guys who owned the brownstone and lived on the ground and first floors. But, they had become friends, so I dropped the headphones and opened the door. Katie stood there, wrapped in wool, covered with snow. "Oh," she said, "Mark told me you'd be naked and to just come on up. But I guess, not quite." "I can solve that really easily," I told her, waving her in, perhaps putting a finger to the waistband. "Put your pants on Ulster boy, don't be afraid of winter." She paused, let her eyes roll across me. "We're going out into the storm."

I put on clothes, and a sweater, and a jacket and scrounged around until I discovered a misplaced hat and gloves, and we went down the stairs and out the door. The stoop we stood on, and all the buildings left and right, were from the 1840s, and now, that was obvious. There were no sounds, the city had gone into hiding, leaving this path to the past to us alone.

We walked toward the park and climbed the hill. Manhattan, usually a backdrop so close you were sure you could touch it, was gone. I laughed, and kissed her. Then we went back down, walking toward Fulton Street, hardly speaking. The snow was so thick you couldn't see more than a half block in any direction, so buildings suddenly appeared, as if ghosts in a Dickens Christmas tale, and just as quickly receeded. It was perfect.

We walked all the way to the bridge, and out to the middle of the river, where the wind swirled the flakes into van Gogh-Starry Night streaks. "Let's go back and find hot coffee in the Heights," I whispered. "Sure," she said, "but hold onto me first, right here."
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copyright 2007 by Ira Socol - photgraph is the Brooklyn Bridge in snow.
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Shit, and here I was pissed at the snow because it kept shutting down my office.
Posted 12/6/2007 6:42 PM by Drakonskyr Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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I'm such a sap. I love stories with the girl
Posted 12/6/2007 7:02 PM by BoureeMusique Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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oh wow.  That is exactly what I love about winter.
Posted 12/6/2007 7:03 PM by jrat - reply

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Something about a snowy moment in time that evokes so much. Nicely done, sir! Very nicely done!
Posted 12/6/2007 7:08 PM by RedHairedCelt Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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I can't imagine being too hot in winter... perhaps because I live in a draftyold house and my fingers are cold and stiff while I'm trying to type this.

You do know how to make a girl sigh Ulster boy.

Posted 12/6/2007 7:17 PM by angi1972 Xanga True Member Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

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I enjoyed this. It made think of my own winter "fun".

Have a good day, Ira!
Posted 12/6/2007 7:41 PM by skanickadee Xanga True Member Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

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A grammar final Monday (not too worried) and my paper due Monday... so I'm silly in having houseguests, but it'll be fun. I'm only taking two classes.
Posted 12/6/2007 7:47 PM by BoureeMusique Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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RYC:  is piddle also an irish expression?
Posted 12/6/2007 9:09 PM by travelerblue Xanga True Member - reply

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I LOVE the way you've written this!!

RYC: The Grumpy Old Men/Women show is very humorously done. They aren't all old people in it. Most are from ages ranging 35 to 70 and it's not done in a boring complaining or nasty way, just with a "tongue in cheek" view of ordinary every day things that can bug all of us.  

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Snow always brings a quietness to a city when it falls. One of my friends is going to NYC for the first time on New Years Day, I told Central Park is a must place to visit. It would be magical if it snows then as well.
Posted 12/6/2007 9:17 PM by online now englishjuls - reply

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You want snow? We got snow. In the immortal words of Gilles Vigneault: Mon pays, ce n’est pas un pays, c’est l’hiver.
Posted 12/6/2007 9:47 PM by elgan Xanga True Member Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

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I understand about being too hot in the winter. Wonderful tale!
Posted 12/6/2007 9:52 PM by soonaquitter Xanga Premium Member - reply

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Ulster Boy, eh? Silent night is a great title. I think the most wonderful snow experience is walking at night, with only a few lights, beacons that look like dandelion puffs, the crunching of fresh snow the only sound.
Posted 12/6/2007 9:59 PM by buddhacat Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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I love snow, which is why I never get to see any. Someday I'll move out of the jungle.
Posted 12/6/2007 10:17 PM by crackcannon - reply

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Ooooh!  I loved this absolutely enchanting piece of beautiful story telling.  And to think that Brooklyn produced romance in a setting..... where "there were no sounds, the city had gone into hiding, leaving this path to the past to us alone."  I just loved this!!!
Posted 12/6/2007 10:50 PM by GrapiesWordsofWisdom Xanga True Member - reply

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snow... i love the idea of snow much more than the reality of it, and i've not seen this side of the city but the vision interests me much. beautifully written- as always! the details keep getting more and more vivid! :)
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ps. thanks for the link...
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I grew up a desert rat, so I've always been fascinated by winter. Vermont just got its first big snow on Monday. I was walking to my car after work on Tuesday night; the sky glimmered, the snow glistened, and the highway was silent, absolutely still.
Posted 12/7/2007 12:42 AM by Ruphelia Xanga True Member - reply

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your own private snow world
Posted 12/7/2007 2:31 AM by beautifulwolf Xanga True Member - reply

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ahhh what wonderful imagery..( I shall refrain from comment on you in your underwear), the buildings suddenly appearing like ghosts then receeding...how wonderful! you make me miss snow so much....
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Reminds me of the time in our young married life,  it started snowing about ten PM and by the time I got home from work after midnight, the streets were still,  no lights in the houses and they wore a mantle of white with sharp edges and corners softened.   I got home,  woke Heather, persuaded her to put on her heavy clothes and come out with me.   I loved it,  and the silence and sifting snow enchanted her as well.  I don't think she had ever been outside when the world slept.
Posted 12/7/2007 6:15 AM by riddiger Xanga True Member Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

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I recall the radiators at school but never getting so hot.  I froze to death in school, my legs always tucked under me trying to stay warm. 

Your description of your window view was excellent, I had it pictured clock and all and the fade created by the snow. 

Lovely romantic insert, the kind I like and with a perfect (repeat perfect) ending.

Posted 12/7/2007 3:09 PM by RSBlain Xanga True Member Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

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You painted the scene so well, I almost reached for a cup of hot cocoa--then I remembered that we are supposed to reach 80º here today...  Crazy!
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That's a lovely piece. I liked the way it ended.

Winter: I don't know if we're going to have any in this part of TX. So far, we're into 70's many afternoons. I suppose it'll happen when we get one of our usual "ice storms" in January. Even if we do get snow, it's not enough for sledding. However, I can't say I complain about it. It's lovely to read about winter and snow, though -- it does bring back childhood winters.

Thank you.

~~Cheers

Posted 12/8/2007 3:19 AM by DonnaLou Xanga True Member - reply


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