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Friday, December 07, 2007

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bad dream last night...

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The boardwalk is almost completely empty. If I look as far as I can see east, then west, perhaps I can spot three solitary figures as tiny silhouettes against the grey December sky.

Sometimes solitude calls. And you need the endless horizon. And the sound of the wind and the sea wiping all else away.

Far away in Manhattan the damage by now lies heaped on stainless steal tables at the morgue. Piles of failure. Assorted debris of law enforcement gone completely wrong. I'd said I'd be "right back," and walked out of the alley and onto the street and down to the corner and then, from Ninth Avenue over to Sixth, the wind tearing at the t-shirt I wore, and climbed on the first train appearing, riding all the way until the tracks ended.

I should go back. I should get someplace warm. At least I should buy, or steal, a sweatshirt. Something. But for this hour I am frozen. Not by the cold. Simply by the need to not be among humanity.
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copyright 2007 by Ira Socol
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St. Nicholas Church on St. Nicholas Day. One more American family made safe through gun ownership - "The police recovered an AK-47-style semiautomatic weapon at the store, which the authorities said Mr. Hawkins had apparently stolen from his stepfather. He carried two magazines with 30 rounds each, the police chief said, "the capacity to fire multiple rounds in a short period of time."' A bigger obstacle to peace than Hamas? - perhaps.
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That is a bad dream, and a worse reality. Sleep well tonight, and find some joy this weekend.
Posted 12/7/2007 7:15 PM by scifiknitter Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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Horrible images.

Seems to me the issue in the story of the young Mr Hawkins was that there was no family to be made safe.  Looks to me like his parents were complete failures through indifference.

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It does look a very bleak place on the broadwalk. As for the shooting what was his stepfather doing giving him access to a gun with all his mental health issues.
Posted 12/7/2007 9:14 PM by online now englishjuls - reply

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Funny, Your post is about not wanting to face humanity and mine is about missing it.

Aren't we odd ducks.

Posted 12/7/2007 9:58 PM by angi1972 Xanga True Member Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

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sometimes, it is important to be alone

and i agree about going to the shore for that perspective
Posted 12/8/2007 1:37 AM by beautifulwolf Xanga True Member - reply

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No snow in this one, but effect on me -- chilling. 

Hope you are get some good rest.

~~Cheers

Posted 12/8/2007 3:24 AM by DonnaLou Xanga True Member - reply

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When I read your pieces, you take me with you...as close as your shadow and I felt desperate in this one...like I was the last one left on earth and no human voice to tell me, "it's okay."
Posted 12/8/2007 3:57 AM by GrapiesWordsofWisdom Xanga True Member - reply

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Somehow, this one reminds me of Omaha.  But then again, everything reminds me of Omaha today.  Oh, well, at least last night Aaron Neville took my mind off of ...even...
Posted 12/8/2007 2:50 PM by twoberry Xanga True Member Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

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every now and then you throw in something that I can't help but think "I would of been thinking the same thing" and then wonder if anyone else would ever think that way. In this little piece it is the sentence "At least I should buy, or steal, a sweatshirt." I used to feel bad I would even think such things, but in the grand scheme of things I now realize it's just one of the ways I see all possibilities...I just never admitted it to anyone.
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Things do happen in the world of law enforcement.  Consequences are not always undeserved even if the after chaos is a maximum of hurt and pain for someone.  I like to hope agencies are filled with honesty working on the good for mankind.  I like to think accidents are just that, accidents.  I know it isn't always the case so I avoid.  You suffer because there is a heart where it should be working together with a very intelligent brain.

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The photo of St Nicholas Church is amazing. Isn't that bread magnificent? Enough to join the Greek Orthodox Church. I'm not a believer, but there's something very comforting about traditions being maintained, respite from the tide of humanity.
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Huge Props!
Yeah, get away from humanity:)
Posted 12/8/2007 11:49 PM by anonymouswish - reply

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Nice to see you posting again, Ira.  Nice piece!

Posted 12/9/2007 5:01 AM by RakkaRay - reply

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I like this...reminds me of times in life when we all just walk away and freeze up somewhere...hope you're warm and safe ....'Til the Next
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goodness. i despise bad dreams.
Posted 12/9/2007 5:52 PM by alohatiger - reply

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I'd heard the funfair in Coney Island has been bulldozed...and taken over by Disney!
Posted 12/10/2007 5:49 AM by Fongster8 Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

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I'm having one of those "duh, that's obvious" moments, but I have to say it: your voice NEVER wavers. It's very consistent. Most awesome. And another great piece.
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When the hell will the nation give up its love affair over guns?
Posted 12/10/2007 7:46 PM by basesonballs - reply

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Sometimes that's just what it takes.....an absence of humanity
Posted 12/10/2007 8:01 PM by mlbncsga - reply

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You are suffering of your humaneness . I like the symbol of the train but don' t miss it !!!

In friendship
Michel

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speaking of coming back... where are you on here?! I miss your writing!

~S
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Very descriptive and disconcerting.
Posted 6/11/2008 6:39 PM by hilton156 - reply


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